Writing Analytically 7.2

Question 1
1. The thesis states the obvious and has no compelling argument
2. "Critical" is too braod of a term
3. The thesis statement does not predicate
Although there exists these two established claims, the challenge of protecting the environment while simultaneously satisfying the economy remains the ultimate objective.

Question 2
1. There is a lot of weak verb use
2. There are a lot of generalizations such as "race"
3. The verbs are not strong enough to support the nouns and make for a strong statement
The corporate stereotype, in which women are viewed as too sensitive and compassionate to succeed in a competitive firm, hinders the number of women promoted into executive positions.